Letter To the Author

Hello once again, this week for my post I am going to be writing a letter to the author of the Harry Potter series, J.K. Rowling. this is what I wrote:

Dear JK Rowling,

Hello, I am Cameron, I am writing to you to tell you what I think about the Harry Potter series and what you could do to improve future books. So first off, the things you did well: 

1. excellent character development 
2. amazing plot progression
3. incredible diction and syntactical usage
4. incredibly vivid imagery

Those are the general places that you did extremely well, here are somethings that you could have improved:

1. character development for minor characters
2. use detailed imagery more often
3. (this one is just my opinion) add more humor

if you actually read this, please consider it and incorporate it into your next novel, if you think that you should.

Sincerely,

Cameron

(this was supposed to be posted on 5/5)